Thursday, September 25, 2008

Where Plans Fall Down

Subtitled "My Mindful Friend Lives Mindfully"

*A short pretext from the author
I use the word scenario because I dislike "part", and "scene" implies a play. These scenarios will be based upon true stories from my life. As a note, the title is creatively crafted to coincide with my clever, confounding mind. These scenarios, and the whole they create (Where Plans Fall Down: My Mindful Friend Lives Mindfully) is written solely for the author's enjoyment and the enjoyment of the, albeit limited, interested audience. Shall we dance?


SCENARIO ONE: The Alley; Ah the Rain

As I stepped into the alley, the scene was set.
Of course I have to take the trash out when it's creepy...Then again, if I had just done it earlier when I was asked...
Carrying the trash bag and thoughts of murder, I bravely walked on. When I looked down, I saw the frightening shadows of trees blowing moderately in the wind. If I looked up, I saw the eerie orange street light and dark leaves blowing across them. At left was the garage and the unfamiliar joined outline of the four or five trash cans. Fine, two of them were recycling. Still creepy.

I managed to maintain my cool at 11:30 in a dark, rainy alley to put the trash in the can. That's when I had to turn around. Everything is always goes smoothly until you turn your back to the enemy. As I started to slowly walk back, I resisted the urge to nervously look back. However, whenever you resist one thing, another always pops up. Since I wasn't looking back, I began to accelerate as I walked toward the sidewalk. When I reached the sidewalk I could look down the alley, and I did. Nothing.
Wow, what is wrong with me? There's clearly nothing there. I was just down there!
When I got to the "home stretch", the last little bit up to the front door - hoo boy! That's when I ran. I had gotten the heebie-jeebies being so close to the door, and I high-tailed it out of there. I just barely survived an attack on my life by nothing!


Time jump: The next day
As I walked, Major spotted them first. The enemies had converged at the crossroads and were prepared. Three, no four, maybe even five of them, all sitting in the trees ready to ambush us. They saw that we saw them however, and quickly understood that since they could no longer ambush, they would lose. The squirrels had given up.

Time jump: Thursday, after school; the day before the alley
It had been raining on and off all day. Then, as we all were waiting to go home, the sun broke up with the sky, and the sky couldn't handle it. It poured.

It rained. Such a wet, cold, shivering experience of pleasure. The rain always comes, the rain always goes. But the rain doesn't always wash down our barriers. It did. It rained.

We were a smaller group now; people had been slowly dwindling away as their rides came, or as they left for meetings or sports. There was an awning several inches from us, but no one wanted to leave the group. So we stayed. In the rain. A group. We chatted, starting a conversation that never had any aim (that's the best kind). What we were didn't matter, only who we were. The rain is good at stripping away our identities, good at freeing ourselves from possession. Good job, rain. It's only been four weeks, and yet it's already been four weeks. An awkward time, I'll admit. Superficial friendships are a necessity, and yet they are hated. So confusing...
The rain had done its job though - now I just wait for the results. Life should be done grading my test soon, I guess. For now, all I can do is, like others in countless different forms, wait. I'm just gonna tough it out.
Me: thanks rain
Me: see you
Me: lylas
Me: bye

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow i have to admit --
the first one is like a play on a blog post, although i enjoyed the whole squirrel thing, its kinda like i knew there wasnt anything there. it wouldve been better if somehow you could have made it seem like there was possibly something there. or maybe dramatized the whole day two enemies thing. overall: a B+ i think

the second one is more of an abstract kind of story about just rain in general. its interesting the insights you have about it. the end is a little confusing, but im sure you understand it. so overall: A-

sorry for the grades, i find it amusing

Krista said...

wow, i feel really bad, i totally tried to comment on this at like midnight last night but then when i hit "publish your comment" my internet was all "firefox is not connected to the internet" and i was all WTF?! but i shall resurrect my comment.

Krista said...

(here we go)

yayyy garret's posting blog stories (blories? stogs? whatever they're called, i like them!)

and yes, we shall dance, without further adieu.

i'm very much digging your title and subtitle, though i can't say i fully grasp the meanings of either (but i know you're going to elaborate upon them later ;) ).

i LOLed twice in The Alley segment, because i never do anything the first time i'm asked either, haha.

and though you sounded a little psycho-paranoid with the whole "I just barely survived an attack on my life by nothing!" that happens to me every time i go in my basement late at night because i have an irrational fear of those thousand-legged bugs that make their way into there from time to time.

the squirrel thing is super cute. if you were in my art of comp class and you had written it in haiku form, mr. connolly very well may have died and gone to heaven.

the rain part was definitely my favorite, though. the whole philosophical and metaphorical aspect of it is totally sexy, haha. if you didn't put a lot of thought into it, you did an excellent job of making it sound like you did.

and i know what you mean about the four weeks and the superficial friendships stuff. that was really cool the way you worked those in, although i hope you're not actually having that many social issues or anything because you're undoubtedly one of the coolest people in the world with one of the best blogs ever.

me: thanks garret!
me: see you
me: lylab (i don't think i can say lylas haha)
me: bye!





ps- yeah, pittsburgh, go ahead and call yourself something else. i personally recommend public static void main(String[]args) , which is what i would call myself if it didn't automatically come up as Krista every time i commented